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Colleen Bent's avatar

I like this.....you can almost feel the page breathing.

Lirian Ever-Weaver's avatar

Thank you. That’s one of my favorite compliments a piece can receive. I’m grateful you felt that.

DWWakefield's avatar

"Stayed sharp beneath the silence where no one could see it draw blood"

I love this!

Lirian Ever-Weaver's avatar

Thank you. I am honored you enjoyed the chapter. It means a great deal to know that line resonated with you.

DWWakefield's avatar

Much of what you write resonates with me. ⚔️